Neutral Zone Treaty Nagotiations

[Evil Person]

(We will discuss this via view screen)

"I am the Romulan leader, all faction leaders, I welcome you to the meeting to the signing of the treaty, we will make the treaty with combined effort........here is the basic layout of the treaty I have planned"

(This message was sent to the view screens via text)

Romulan Neutral Zone Treaty
Draft I

Section I.

All factions have the right to enter the ______ System in the Neutral Zone with 1 Large ship; this ship will be authorised to fire on any ship that violates weapons deactivation. All ships in the ____ System in the Neutral Zone are to report to ________ who is the designated head of the station. To gain access to the system you are to fill out entry forum I which is submitted via the Entry thread.

Section II.

Ships allowed in the system include, 1 large vessel, all fighters and shuttles, and the following ships, Nebula Class,Oberth Class,Miranda Class, Romulan Science ship, Romulan Drone, Romulan Scout, Klingon Bird of Prey, Tellerite Cruiser, Cardassian Transport, and the Vaaduar Kazon ship. If 3 or more of the faction leaders agree then one faction can be given only shuttle and fighter access to the area, if all but 1 member agrees then that faction has no access to the area. Should the factions enter with more than the vessels stated above, they will be shot at by the planets automatic defence array. No civilian ships are allowed enter to the sector without permission, only designated supply ships are allowed in the area, all other ships will be captured and searched.

Section III.

The rights for all people in the ____ System include, 1. The right to remain silent, anything you say or do can be used ageist you in a court of law, 2. Your ship can be searched, should you resist you will be arrested, 3. You are allowed to dock with the station after being searched, 4. You are prohibited to activate any weapons or cloaks in the _____ System, you will be apprehended and arrested if you do so.

Section VI.

For all ships with a faction, you are designated to have weapons on line, but not cloaks, or shields, armour is to be retracted if possible. No special weapons are to be active. All science personnel are not to wear side arms, only security and faction leaders are allowed to wear side arms, and activate them.

Section V.

Should any hostile action be taken ageist the treaty, or the ships in the area, the person(s) responsible will be punished to the fullest of punishment, this may result in death for putting an unstable treaty at risk and causing or nearly causing a galactic indecent.

Section IV.

Should this treaty be broken the laws require that the faction(s) affected by the broken laws to have a faction leader(s) or representative(s) at the court Marshall to determine the punishment. Braking this treaty may result in a galactic incident and possibly causing a war, please refrain from braking this treaty unless necessary to keeping piece. All factions that do not agree to this agreement will not be granted access to the area, should they try to enter they will be captured and destroyed and/or punished to the fullest of law and the ship(s) be impounded

Signed:

Willice

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Approval By these organisations:

Tal'Shiar
Romulan Government
Romulan Military
Romulan Science Directorate
Vulcan Science Directorate
Tellerite Science Commity
(More may include in the final draft, Starfleet command, Cardassian Science academy, and more)

"What do you think, is this suitable for the treaty?"

^{Edited by Venator: All I did was correct spelling.}

[Ari Hadar]

(all i see is a block of word so i just skimmed it)

I, Legate Venator, Commander and Chief Of the Cardassian Order, Sign This treaty

Add these Organizations
Cardassian Central Command
Cardassian Science Academy
Cardassian Navy
Cardassian Rescue Department
Cardassian Bureau of Investigation

[Evil Person]

ok, i will after we hear from viceroy, he may want to make some changes

[Ari Hadar]

ok When the treaty Is done add these Emblems to the top


i Also Edited the 1st post for spelling mistakes

[Evil Person]

Romulan Neutral Zone Treaty
Draft II



Section I.

All factions have the right to enter the ______ System in the Neutral Zone with 1 Large ship; this ship will be authorised to fire on any ship that violates weapons deactivation. All ships in the ____ System in the Neutral Zone are to report to ________ who is the designated head of the station. To gain access to the system you are to fill out entry forum I which is submitted via the Entry thread.

Section II.

Ships allowed in the system include, 1 large vessel, all fighters and shuttles, and the following ships, Nebula Class,Oberth Class,Miranda Class, Romulan Science ship, Romulan Drone, Romulan Scout, Klingon Bird of Prey, Tellerite Cruiser, Cardassian Survay Ship,Cardassian Transport, and the Vaaduar Kazon Raider. If 3 or more of the faction leaders agree then one faction can be given only shuttle and fighter access to the area, if all but 1 member agrees then that faction has no access to the area. Should the factions enter with more than the vessels stated above, they will be shot at by the planets automatic defence array. No civilian ships are allowed enter to the sector without permission, only designated supply ships are allowed in the area, all other ships will be captured and searched.

Section III.

The rights for all people in the ____ System include, 1. The right to remain silent, anything you say or do can be used ageist you in a court of law, 2. Your ship can be searched, should you resist you will be arrested, 3. You are allowed to dock with the station after being searched, 4. You are prohibited to activate any weapons or cloaks in the _____ System, you will be apprehended and arrested if you do so.

Section VI.

For all ships with a faction, you are designated to have weapons on line, but not cloaks, or shields, armor is to be retracted if possible. No special weapons are to be active. All science personnel are not to wear side arms, only security and faction leaders are allowed to wear side arms, and activate them.

Section V.

Should any hostile action be taken ageist the treaty, or the ships in the area, the person(s) responsible will be punished to the fullest of punishment, this may result in death for putting an unstable treaty at risk and causing or nearly causing a galactic indecent.

Section IV.

Should this treaty be broken the laws require that the faction(s) affected by the broken laws to have a faction leader(s) or representative(s) at the court Marshall to determine the punishment. Braking this treaty may result in a galactic incident and possibly causing a war, please refrain from braking this treaty unless necessary to keeping piece. All factions that do not agree to this agreement will not be granted access to the area, should they try to enter they will be captured and destroyed and/or punished to the fullest of law and the ship(s) be impounded

Signed:

Willice

Legate Venator

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Approval By these organisations:

Tal'Shiar
Romulan Government
Romulan Military
Romulan Science Directorate
Vulcan Science Directorate
Tellerite Science Commity
Cardassian Central Command
Cardassian Science Academy
Cardassian Navy
Cardassian Rescue Department
Cardassian Bureau of Investigation

[Evil Person]

I think the planet should be devron, and it should be Devron, in the devron system, it is a good place becuase it is surrounded by nebulas and only ships with the correct shield modlation can get in before the crew starts to suffer from Tallarian Flu, this can kill.....also cloaks dont work in the vecinity of devron either, the nebula's affect the cloaking field.

[Ari Hadar]

Legate is a Rank/Position not a name

Devron a bad idea since it can kill

[Evil Person]

Sorry, also it can only kill if you go without treatment for 10 days, that is not a problem, since this will have medical facilities based for that.........and also Iconi is the one that kills instantly, the Devron is the one were shields make a difforence, if you get a hypospary for it, you wont be affected........call your doctor is the symtoms get worse or you develope a headach lasting for more that 1 year, This hypospray is not for everyone, people with liver disease or Barckly Disease should not take this hypospray due to a specific neural pathway defect.

[Ari Hadar]

well I suppose

[Viceroy]

I propose no cloaks be added to this, if this is a peaceful treaty, no war-type related things are needed. Say all weaponry and cloaks are to be offline unless a war is declared by all institutions (Federation, Romulan Star empire, Cardassian Order, and so on) against another institution or against one another. You should also add, one institution may declare war on another while in the same quadrant. Thus they will be both breaking this treaty and it will be dissolved by these 2 institutions.

[Evil Person]

For the weapons, please refer to Section VI. Sentence 1.

For all ships with a faction, you are designated to have weapons on line, but not cloaks, or shields, armor is to be retracted if possible.

And also, even if the factinos plung into war, the treaty is going to stay active in the sector we choose, that way, after the war, in piece time, if the war is settled, you have a place to begine piece talks, this place will be a center were there is no combat, the weapons of the government ships will be online, simply for protection, no cloaks, shields, or armor........if it is the devron system, you can have shields on while entering the system, due to the Roleplaying i did and i added a disease to a nebula surrounding the planet, after in the system, you are to deactivate your shields. in the system you are safe from radiation. Will finish later, g2g

[Evil Person]

Romulan Neutral Zone Treaty
Draft III



Section I.

All factions have the right to enter the Eden System in the Neutral Zone with 1 Large ship; this ship will be authorised to fire on any ship that violates weapons deactivation. All ships in the Eden System in the Neutral Zone are to report to Eden who is the designated head of the station. To gain access to the system you are to fill out entry forum I which is submitted via the Entry thread.

Section II.

Ships allowed in the system include, 1 large vessel, all fighters and shuttles, and the following ships, Nebula Class,Oberth Class,Miranda Class, Romulan Science ship, Romulan Drone, Romulan Scout, Klingon Bird of Prey, Tellerite Cruiser, Cardassian Survay Ship,Cardassian Transport, and the Vaaduar Kazon Raider. If 3 or more of the faction leaders agree then one faction can be given only shuttle and fighter access to the area, if all but 1 member agrees then that faction has no access to the area. Should the factions enter with more than the vessels stated above, they will be shot at by the planets automatic defence array. No civilian ships are allowed enter to the sector without permission, only designated supply ships are allowed in the area, all other ships will be captured and searched.

Section III.

The rights for all people in the Eden System include, 1. The right to remain silent, anything you say or do can be used ageist you in a court of law, 2. Your ship can be searched, should you resist you will be arrested, 3. You are allowed to dock with the station after being searched, 4. You are prohibited to activate any weapons or cloaks in the Eden System, you will be apprehended and arrested if you do so.

Section VI.

For all ships with a faction, you are designated to have weapons on line, but not cloaks, or shields, armor is to be retracted if possible. No special weapons are to be active. All science personnel are not to wear side arms, only security and faction leaders are allowed to wear side arms, and activate them.

Section V.

Should any hostile action be taken ageist the treaty, or the ships in the area, the person(s) responsible will be punished to the fullest of punishment, this may result in death for putting an unstable treaty at risk and causing or nearly causing a galactic indecent.

Section IV.

Should this treaty be broken the laws require that the faction(s) affected by the broken laws to have a faction leader(s) or representative(s) at the court Marshall to determine the punishment. Braking this treaty may result in a galactic incident and possibly causing a war, please refrain from braking this treaty unless necessary to keeping piece. All factions that do not agree to this agreement will not be granted access to the area, should they try to enter they will be captured and destroyed and/or punished to the fullest of law and the ship(s) be impounded

Signed:

Willice

Legate Venator

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Approval By these organisations:

Romulan Tal'Shiar
Romulan Government
Romulan Military
Romulan Science Directorate
Vulcan Science Directorate
Tellerite Science Commity
Cardassian Central Command
Cardassian Science Academy
Cardassian Navy
Cardassian Rescue Department
Cardassian Bureau of Investigation

[Evil Person]

I Choose the planet Eden, the Federation has been there before during the times of Kirk, since this planet has been visited by the Federation before, even after the neutral zone has deemed prohibited, this will not contradict the Neutral Zone laws if we use eden then, also i hcanged the emblems, though i dont like them, so i might change them back......i dont know.

[Viceroy]

The other emblems are MUCH MORE BETTER. And I agree with this Treaty, however, a Defense treaty is called for in case we are attacked by another race and want to assist each other in attacking that race. And secondly, for Section III. The Rights while in the Eden Quadrant is completely inaccurate. They are not rights, they are what you are suppose to do if you are commanded to halt your vessel by the local authorities.

And thirdly, it should be noted that the Star Fleet Command, Romulan Star Fleet, and Cardassian Star Fleet have the rights to stop someone if they are violating the treaty, however, the person DOES have the FREEDOM to run and fire or whatever but they will not be obligated by thus treaty any longer and are an enemy to the factions.

If all these amendments are made, I shall sign. I am a tough negotiator.

[Evil Person]

Romulan Neutral Zone Treaty
Draft IV



Section I.

All factions have the right to enter the Eden System in the Neutral Zone with 1 Large ship; this ship will be authorised to fire on any ship that violates weapons deactivation. All ships in the Eden System in the Neutral Zone are to report to the designated head of the station. To gain access to the system you are to fill out entry forum I which is submitted via the Entry thread.

Section II.

Ships allowed in the system include, 1 large vessel, all fighters and shuttles, and the following ships, Nebula Class,Oberth Class,Miranda Class, Romulan Science ship, Romulan Drone, Romulan Scout, Tellerite Cruiser, Cardassian Survay Ship, and the Cardassian Transport. If 2 of the faction leaders agree then one faction can be given only shuttle and fighter access to the area, if only 1 member agrees then that faction has not lost access to the area. Should the factions enter with more than the vessels stated above, they will be shot at by the planets automatic defence array. No civilian ships are allowed enter to the sector without permission, only designated supply ships are allowed in the area, all other ships will be captured and searched.

Section III.

The rights you have in the system are simple, you are allowed to have weapons, just not online. Independant traders are allowed in the system after filling out the entry forms. You have the right to dock with the station after you get clearence. You are Prohibited from going near the Borg vessel in the research bay. The authorities have the right to stop you and search your ship, they are not allowed to attack you unless they have a reason, you have the right to know of that reason. You have the right to remain silent if taken into custody, anything you say and do will be used agenst you in a court of law.

Section VI.

For all ships with a faction, you are designated to have weapons on line, but not cloaks, or shields, armor is to be retracted if possible. No special weapons are to be active. All science personnel are not to wear side arms, only security and faction leaders are allowed to wear side arms, and activate them.

Section V.

Should any hostile action be taken ageist the treaty, or the ships in the area, the person(s) responsible will be punished to the fullest of punishment, this may result in death for putting an unstable treaty at risk and causing or nearly causing a galactic indecent.

Section IV.

Should this treaty be broken the laws require that the faction(s) affected by the broken laws to have a faction leader(s) or representative(s) at the court Marshall to determine the punishment. Braking this treaty may result in a galactic incident and possibly causing a war, please refrain from braking this treaty unless necessary to keeping piece. All factions that do not agree to this agreement will not be granted access to the area, should they try to enter they will be captured and destroyed and/or punished to the fullest of law and the ship(s) be impounded

Signed:

Willice

Legate Venator

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Approval By these organisations:

Romulan Tal'Shiar
Romulan Government
Romulan Military
Romulan Science Directorate
Vulcan Science Directorate
Tellerite Science Commity
Cardassian Central Command
Cardassian Science Academy
Cardassian Navy
Cardassian Rescue Department
Cardassian Bureau of Investigation

[Evil Person]

So, garran, you want us to make this into a treaty for the entire faction, not just the Planet of Eden? This would be a compleatly difforent format, we would not be only addressing Eden, if it was the who faction, we would be discussing entire quadrents, and also the Romulan Star Empire does not have a star fleet, the Romulan Star Empire also does not want to make a new treaty, shure i was going to sugest a change to the Treaty we have with the federation, a treaty we have had for over 200 years, but not with the cardassians, you may have helped us with our initial assult on the gamma quadrent, and on the dominion, but you still betrayed us, and all of our factions lost ships during that war.

[Ari Hadar]

what are you on about

[Evil Person]

1. The Romulan Star Empire does not have a star fleet

2. We have a military

3. And we have the Tal'Shiar

4. You are trying to make is so we need to help you in a time of war, this is not an alliance, the Romulans arent ready to do that with the Cardassians, now with the federation we are planning to make an Alliance, since 200 years without a major incident, and the assistance with the Reman Warbird has drawn us closer together.

[Ari Hadar]

1. The Romulan Star Empire does not have a star fleet

i never said you did

2. We have a military

i know

3. And we have the Tal'Shiar

if this is after the Dominion was like you said it was, the tal'shair were crippled, when they attacked the founder's home world. something that wouldn't be easy to repair

4. You are trying to make is so we need to help you in a time of war, this is not an alliance, the Romulans arent ready to do that with the Cardassians, now with the federation we are planning to make an Alliance, since 200 years without a major incident, and the assistance with the Reman Warbird has drawn us closer together.

well i never asked for war help. all we have and want is a pace treaty


and lastly it was Vice who said all that not me

[Viceroy]

Yes, Garran, you are correct. I said all of that and not Garran. I said Star Fleet because I did not know the name of your military so I was just something I just wrote down. Simple. And Garran, do not forget the real Star Trek Universe history does fall into this Game.

[Evil Person]

.....actually some of it does, the dominion war, the Reman incident, all of Kirk through Enterprise-C, some of the things that happend with enterprise-D through E, And voyager getting lost. But everything else, like the federation still having a small fleet after the dominion war, DS9, um yah, alot of that dont exist anymore, i changed the history so that DS9 was destroyed, every factions fleets were destroyed, so it would be a blank slate.

[Ari Hadar]

.....actually some of it does, the dominion war, the Reman incident, all of Kirk through Enterprise-C, some of the things that happend with enterprise-D through E, And voyager getting lost. But everything else, like the federation still having a small fleet after the dominion war, DS9, um yah, alot of that dont exist anymore, i changed the history so that DS9 was destroyed, every factions fleets were destroyed, so it would be a blank slate.

so in that case the tal'shiar will still be crippled

[Evil Person]

Yes, but the regular Government, me, gave them a ship, only 1, and the Tal'Shiar is back, just in very small unintimidating numbers, there are like only 400 members

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